I love this so much.
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Pretty good for a first build.
Obviously it is lacking in content but that is to be expected for this early in development anyway.
Some of the positions could be improved, specially the blowjob, its perspective looks quite off. Speaking of which, it would be nice to have multiple perspectives\camera angles for the sex scenes (they could be upgrades\unlockables).
Also as other comment mentioned , it would be nice if the different clothes and accessories had different buffs\stats, they also could have special\extra bonuses\buffs if equipped in conjunction with other clothes\accessories, like each having a few different "combinations", maybe also not having something equipped simultaneously could also be a part of it, I think something like that could work pretty well if there'll be many more clothes\accessories
The art of the gallery is really good, I hope there'll be more iin later versions.
The game has potential, hope the development goes well.
The initial/main melody is very compelling, also its timbre, it's a shame it gets obscured for most of the piece, in my opinion
Also I think the drum-loop from 1:04 to 3:34 is too short/repetitive, and gets boring by the later half despite the added elements, though the part when it slows down is very good.
The ending part is very very good, my favorite part of the piece in fact. Though I think it could've been a little better if the main melody could be heard more clearly, on top of what I think is a delay, rather than drowning on it, or perhaps just too low on the mix, either way. Also that heartbeat kick works really well in it.
i was actually thinking about creating an alternative version to this track which would be more of an ambient background that i could use for a dnd session (this song is for a character as i said), the alt track would be putting more attention to the melody, im glad that you liked it!
thank you for the feedback, especially the one about the drums, i'll make sure to take it to heart!
At 2:37 or so till 3:19 the audio gets very "muddy", the pad in the mid-high frequencies drowns the rest of element that share frequency-space (even if not necessarily bad, I think it doesn't work here), and when it comes back later, but to a lesser extent.
Using side-chain compression or EQing could solve that.
It's quite a long way to go, but the style has potential.
Its different sections feel too unrelated to one another despite their similarities, also, it feels empty throughout the whole piece (like if it ware missing tracks). Also it probably would benefit from being produced in such a way that it'd sound wider.
In my opinion its best aspect is its deviation from genre archetypes.
Yeah this is probably one of my worst songs, still struggle with parts not feeling related though even in my newest ones because I have too many ideas.
Swans reference?
Anyhow, the framing is very good, though I think a version without the images but with the barbed wire would be better, admittedly it is very minor a thing, but thought worth mentioning.
Psychasthmia?
They look great!
I adore art.
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